Bommer Plumbing — cinematic rebuild

16:9 · 37s · 1920×1080 · −14.2 LUFS · review only, nothing sent to the client

★ v2 — THE REBUILD (watch this)

wide establishing shot · scale changes on every cut · 2.6–8s shots · endcard 4s

v1 — the rejected one, for comparison

every shot a close-up, muted grade, 42s

WHAT CHANGED

	v1 (rejected)	v2 (this)
Opening	close-up of a sink	WIDE street, golden hour, sun through the trees
Scale	close-up on all 4 shots	wide / medium / low / close / macro / wide
Camera dials	intimate_observer + window + naturalistic (twice)	epic_scale + contre_jour + teal_orange_epic, plus a speed ramp
Cut rhythm	7–8s, flat	2.6–8s, moves
Captions	on every shot	two
Endcard	6s	4s

#	Shot	Engine + look	cr
1	WIDE street, van arrives	CS 3.5 · epic_scale / contre_jour / teal_orange_epic	25
2	Sink overflows onto the counter	CS 3.0 · speedramp	20
3	Boots and bag hit the driveway	Kling 3.0 pro · 1080p	7
4	Cleanout cap comes off	Kling 3.0 pro · 1080p	7
5	Camera head descends into the pipe	Kling 3.0 pro · 1080p	7
6	Pipe POV → the roots	Seedance 2.0 std · high bitrate	36
7	Both of them at the monitor	CS 3.5 · epic_scale / practicals	30
8	The van	certified still + push — never animated	0
9	Endcard, 4s	the approved card	0

A grey sludge blob. The first sink take rendered the water as a solid sculpture standing a metre above the basin — my prompt asked water to “surge up and flood” with an impact ramp. Re-rolled as an overflowing basin. Correct physics now.
Hidden cuts inside single generations. The van shot was secretly a 5-angle montage and the monitor shot opened on an aerial. My QA threshold was too high to see them; lowered from 0.15 to 0.04 and every clip is now trimmed to its verified clean window.
Two different homeowners. The old sink shot had a different woman from the monitor shot. The re-roll has no people in it, so there is one homeowner in the ad.
Cinema Studio v2 failed twice server-side with no error given (both refunded). That shot moved to Kling pro.

Scene detection on the finished cut returns only my 8 edit points — no hidden cuts survived.
No freezes, flicker or black frames. Loudness −14.2 LUFS / −1.2 dBTP.
Van decals verified: 856 / 783-6721 / 429-4054 / 582-2020 / www.wrbommer.com.
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